According to the whole story, which named “Who was murder”, the plot of it is like the mystery which can hock my mind until to the end. Exciting and interesting, the end of the story just like the boom because we could never think the murder is his wife. In all my writing, I was set to the main character, and I could get his feeling clearly. the event happened, which a rich man was killed by a muddier without any evidence. In his 10 years experience, the muddier is very clear to killing people, and they must have the conflict on benefit before the fighting. Through the scene, the man was hited by edge tool, and there was rain outside, so the clew was covered easily. Probably, the killer already had made plan long time ago, therefore he choses the raining day to commit a crime. But the end makes a big contrast with those description. It is the interesting point of this book.
Moreover, the mood of this whole book pumps my blood. Such as the description of the weather and the color of the environment. Darkness and shadow are the mean color of whole story.
All in all, the story is very effective for my life and I love it!!
2011年5月9日星期一
2011年5月1日星期日
Who was the murder???!!!
Now, it is the time to tell you guys who the murder is!!! Through whole event from the day when he died to now, the murder used three different ways to cover the shadow, but the shadow could show out by the sun. First of all, the murder is a good actor because of the outlooking of the murder. Her face looks so relax after she saw the dead body, and the sadness of her after saw the dead body looks so strange. It is the first point that I catch. Then, after I asked her where did she go when her husband dead, she said she was staying in her friend’s house. It is true that she went to her friend’s house, but the time is different. When I know the dead time of her husband, I realized that there still are 30 minuts between the death and arriving to friend’s house. Finally, she couldn’t believe the ring of her hand was taken of when she used hummer to fight her husband. Because of this ring, which symbolized their love, the whole event was solved.
Why she killed her husband?? Everyone’s death must be having a reason. Her husband cheated to her and had a big conflict with her after she know it. Because of the envy and because of the passion, this tragedy happened. And now, I should told my wife that I love her, because I don’t want to find the murder when I was killed.
Why she killed her husband?? Everyone’s death must be having a reason. Her husband cheated to her and had a big conflict with her after she know it. Because of the envy and because of the passion, this tragedy happened. And now, I should told my wife that I love her, because I don’t want to find the murder when I was killed.
2011年4月24日星期日
More Murders?
The thing aspected to conflict more and more, and there are two more person were added in to my list of murder. First is Amanda Grant, who is Forley's girlfriend, and she was also showed in the house before the death of Forley. She is very strange woman whom I asked her about her boyfriend death, and she could not answer my question logically. Looking her eyes, I tried to get more inside of her mind from her eyes, and the most strange thing is that she reject my eyes. When I asked her that where she go after the time of death of her boyfriend, she answered me that she was sleeping in her home and no one can give evidence.
Another one is Philip Wilver, who is the doctor of Forley. In my mind, he could kill Forley easily by using medical ways, but I cannot find any motivation of him.
All in all, those two person could be murder also, and I will try my best to find the true murder as quick as I can because this event already shocked this city.
Another one is Philip Wilver, who is the doctor of Forley. In my mind, he could kill Forley easily by using medical ways, but I cannot find any motivation of him.
All in all, those two person could be murder also, and I will try my best to find the true murder as quick as I can because this event already shocked this city.
2011年4月17日星期日
God bless me
I have no idea what will happen to me if I did not find the murder because this event is like the boom which already explode in this town, and the mayor gave me huge pressure on finding the murder as quick as possible. Lucky I do not feel lonly because my partner has the same situation with me, but he must be stress at this important time. It is his first time to face the big event which more than one person dead, and his calmness give me much confidence.
I know that it was very shame that a fresh man gives a master big hand when the event turn to bad and bad, but I was also very happy that I have a perfect partner.Okey......lets focus on the thread. The murder tried to cover his step by using the exact time. It means his plan is almost profect, and he know exact structure of the house because I did not find any thread, just like ghost. But, no one is perfect, and if he wanted to bury the truth, all people would be killed by him.
God bless me!!
I know that it was very shame that a fresh man gives a master big hand when the event turn to bad and bad, but I was also very happy that I have a perfect partner.Okey......lets focus on the thread. The murder tried to cover his step by using the exact time. It means his plan is almost profect, and he know exact structure of the house because I did not find any thread, just like ghost. But, no one is perfect, and if he wanted to bury the truth, all people would be killed by him.
God bless me!!
2011年4月5日星期二
Journey 1
This is my first journey after the event happened, which a rich man was killed by a muddier without any evidence. In my 10 years experience, the muddier is very clear to killing people, and they must have the conflict on benefit before the fighting. Through the scene, the man was hited by edge tool, and there was rain outside, so the clew was covered easily. Probably, the killer already had made plan long time ago, therefore he choses the raining day to commit a crime.
My partner is a fresh man of detective, Bowen, who is 28 years ago. He helps me lot on this event. The biggest point he found for me is that the very small blood area upstairs with smooth clew, and because of this discover, the process of killing became more clearly. Considering the process of killing people is very important for this event to find out who was the killer, because we might find some other clew which the muddier left. Today is the day with shadow, and every time when the weather comes out, there must be some horrible events happened by strange reason. And now, I should figer it out the exactly purpose of muddier.
2011年3月29日星期二
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