Conclusion of the story!

According to the whole story, which named “Who was murder”, the plot of it is like the mystery which can hock my mind until to the end. Exciting and interesting, the end of the story just like the boom because we could never think the murder is his wife. In all my writing, I was set to the main character, and I could get his feeling clearly. the event happened, which a rich man was killed by a muddier without any evidence. In his 10 years experience, the muddier is very clear to killing people, and they must have the conflict on benefit before the fighting. Through the scene, the man was hited by edge tool, and there was rain outside, so the clew was covered easily. Probably, the killer already had made plan long time ago, therefore he choses the raining day to commit a crime. But the end makes a big contrast with those description. It is the interesting point of this book.
Moreover, the mood of this whole book pumps my blood. Such as the description of the weather and the color of the environment. Darkness and shadow are the mean color of whole story.
All in all, the story is very effective for my life and I love it!!

Who was the murder???!!!

Now, it is the time to tell you guys who the murder is!!! Through whole event from the day when he died to now, the murder used three different ways to cover the shadow, but the shadow could show out by the sun. First of all, the murder is a good actor because of the outlooking of the murder. Her face looks so relax after she saw the dead body, and the sadness of her after saw the dead body looks so strange. It is the first point that I catch. Then, after I asked her where did she go when her husband dead, she said she was staying in her friend’s house. It is true that she went to her friend’s house, but the time is different. When I know the dead time of her husband, I realized that there still are 30 minuts between the death and arriving to friend’s house. Finally, she couldn’t believe the ring of her hand was taken of when she used hummer to fight her husband. Because of this ring, which symbolized their love, the whole event was solved.
Why she killed her husband?? Everyone’s death must be having a reason. Her husband cheated to her and had a big conflict with her after she know it. Because of the envy and because of the passion, this tragedy happened. And now, I should told my wife that I love her, because I don’t want to find the murder when I was killed.